Thursday, September 22, 2005

I carve out a part of my heart
I make the edges neater
I enclose it carefully in words
showing a glimpse
but not laying it open...
I carve out a part of my mind
I put it on this paper
I cloak it in words
I call it a poem
I push it away
so that it throbs somewhere else.

3.25 p.m


Blogger Easelworks said...

Wow! This is really cool!!
I personally feel this is a great poem. My first thoughts were did she really write it? Which is in itself an indication that this is great stuff! I want to buy your poems ok-- i.e. don't give the copyrights away without checking with me. I am thinking let's publish!!! I will give you a initial advance when we meet. Till then, keep putting finger to keyboard. Ciao!

9:28 PM

Blogger Fayyaz Badruddin said...

FAB! Your Best Yet! Keep it coming!

10:20 PM


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